Website Design

May 13, 2015 22:10
Recently, I was asked a website design of a venture contest.

I didn't have enough time, but for my school and living expenses, I decided to accept the request.

And today, I was making the website almost all day.

It seems I need extra time to complete it.
先日、私はベンチャーコンテストのホームページ制作を依頼されました。

あまり時間に余裕はありませんでしたが、生活費のために依頼を受けました。

そして今日は一日中、ホームページを作っていました。

完成にはもう少し時間がかかりそうです。
No. 1　Timmy's correction
  • Recently, I was asked a website design of a venture contest.
  • Recently, I was asked to do a website design of a venture contest.
  • It seems I need extra time to complete it.
  • It seems I need (some) extra time to complete it.
You are a real Renaissance Man!
kanotown
Thank you very much always for correcting my post! :)
Haha, I'm flattered and honored.
Timmy
You are welcome!
No. 2　Sunny's correction
  • Recently, I was asked a website design of a venture contest.
  • Recently, I was asked to design a website for a venture contest.
  • I didn't have enough time, but for my school and living expenses, I decided to accept the request.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • And today, I was making the website almost all day.
  • And today, I was making the website almost all day.
    　Alternatively: I was making the website all day today.
Wow, website design - how cool :D You sound really busy. Good luck with everything!!
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting my post!
Your words made me happy. :)
No. 3　karupin's correction
  • I didn't have enough time, but for my school and living expenses, I decided to accept the request.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • And today, I was making the website almost all day.
  • And today, it took me almost all day to work on the website.
Sounds tiring! Hope you managed to get some rest after that!
kanotown
Thank you very much for your correction and kind comment! :D
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